Do you wanna laugh about it?
Stay awhile and laugh about it
Keep on laughing till you forget the world exists
Come on go ahead and cry about it
Nothing else to do but cry about it
Keep on crying till there’s no tears left inside
PRE CHORUS
I see you
suffering
I see you
you’re hurting
again
CHORUS
Are you looking for something
more than this life you’re livin’
Are you aching for something
more than what you’ve been given
Don’t let them cloud your mind
Don’t believe in their lies
Do you need to talk about it?
Come on now, let’s talk about it
No use leaving all these things unsaid
What do you want to do about it?
What do you need me to do about it?
I can’t help if you don’t tell me how
PRECHORUS
CHORUS
Please don’t light up again
I’m right here; I’ll be your friend
A quick fix only lasts so long
A high always has its lows
Lean on me, now
You’re not alone
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It's a work in progress and I want to know if it makes any sense before starting on the music. Critique would be very helpful.
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Comments
I see you're trying to convince them that they don't have to rely on the addiction to help them cope they can lean on you and fair much better.
I like the repeating of "talk about it" through the song. It sticks out in a good way.
As for suggesting anything....I can't think of something that would make it better than it already is..
good job.
ok..maybe one thing I don't like
Still good job. I enjoyed reading it.
Thanks!
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"My skin is singed but it heals my heart and with glowing pride I'll wear my scars."
~AFI "Malleus Maleficarum"
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Who are we when we lose ourselves?
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"My skin is singed but it heals my heart and with glowing pride I'll wear my scars."
~AFI "Malleus Maleficarum"
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Who are we when we lose ourselves?
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"My skin is singed but it heals my heart and with glowing pride I'll wear my scars."
~AFI "Malleus Maleficarum"
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